What went well?
- The lineless style really came into its own. I really like the seamless transition between background and foreground.
- I think the shapes and colours work well together the lighting looks really good. As it was my first time attempting to light a scene and do more than just flat shading, I think it turned out well.
- The narrative is pretty clear, although Xanders death could be more obvious that he drowned
What could be improved?
- Xanders death could have been more emphasised
- I should have stuck to a more consistent layout for the storyboards. DeeDee is on a board where there are 9 panels instead of 6, However, I couldn't keep this up as it was too taxing on my computer's power. In hindsight, I should've stuck to 6 panels.

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