Thursday, 21 March 2019

Final Outcome

As stipulated, I have created 3 storyboards for my final outcome. Each document the characters death. I could animate these in the future if I want to

 What went well?

  • The lineless style really came into its own. I really like the seamless transition between background and foreground.
  • I think the shapes and colours work well together the lighting looks really good. As it was my first time attempting to light a scene and do more than just flat shading, I think it turned out well. 
  • The narrative is pretty clear, although Xanders death could be more obvious that he drowned


What could be improved?

  • Xanders death could have been more emphasised
  • I should have stuck to a more consistent layout for the storyboards. DeeDee is on a board where there are 9 panels instead of 6, However, I couldn't keep this up as it was too taxing on my computer's power. In hindsight, I should've stuck to 6 panels. 

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